Though, and its nothing big, or a critisism at all, it just makes me giggle... "Cougar sits in the full glare of Jensen’s frustration, the two white pills in the cup of his hand" (thats the start of the story)
"Gracias,” Cougar says, handing him the three pills and a tepid cup of water to wash them down" (thats the end of the story)
Cougar slipped him an extra pill, for good luck and all, lol.
Its a wonderful story though! I really enjoyed it!
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Date: 2010-08-08 05:56 pm (UTC)Though, and its nothing big, or a critisism at all, it just makes me giggle...
"Cougar sits in the full glare of Jensen’s frustration, the two white pills in the cup of his hand" (thats the start of the story)
"Gracias,” Cougar says, handing him the three pills and a tepid cup of water to wash them down" (thats the end of the story)
Cougar slipped him an extra pill, for good luck and all, lol.
Its a wonderful story though! I really enjoyed it!