The Lady Laughs

You know that I love everything that you write. You know that. But I think what I love most here is how deftly you're interweaving the different parts of the story. There's the emotional arc, there's the kink arc, there's each of the characters' personal arcs, there's the myth-arc, there's the mystery...and all of them are getting their moment to shine and their opportunity to forage forward very evenly. I really love that and I don't know if you've ever done it better than you're doing it here.