Date: 2008-04-14 12:06 am (UTC)
How much do I love you for this fic? Oh soooo much!

Ok, where to begin:

-Jeff, Ever and Zack as a kind of underground railroad make this fic fantastic.

-Ever didn't even do a victory dance, but the idea of it is possibly the cutest thing I've ever imagined.

In his living room, Jared puts his head on Jensen's shoulder. Jensen glances their way, his body a protective barricade between owner and owned.
Even if they're not a couple in the sexual kind of way (I'm a little fuzzy on that in this verse) I melt over protective Jensen.

Jared looks at the bowl with such longing that it makes Jeff want to touch him, surround him and protect him and feed him until he's waddling.
The Jared puppy dog eyes of doom! You are not match for them Jeff!

Jensen catches himself like a cat, all pissy grace. Hunched up, Jensen hisses, "What the hell?"
Yeah, that's a perfect image.

I like how Jensen goes to Jeff (maybe as a way to keep him away from Jared?) and how Jeff just shoves him out.

I hope you come back to visit this verse. I'd love to know more about how Jeff, Jared and Jensen navigate one another.

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