Duuuuuuuuuude. Duuuuuuuuude. Wow. First off I loved the whole fic. I really liked that while the Winchesters are healing physically there is still mental and emotional stuff to deal with.
I have to admit to being confused about John's concern about Andrew. I agree that I found Andrew - odd, but not evil perse, just odd. Not quite what he was saying but I couldn't pinpoint what he was hiding. So you leave us with him hiding that he's the devil? That's just peachy. And then you hint that maybe Sam and Dean are fallen angels, at least I took it to be that way. (And how long as he (Lucifer) been Andrew? Always? After macking with Dean?) And how did Mary not know? I found her order of Andrew not to touch the cooler odd, as though she were afraid he wanted the power for himself. And maybe she did think that, but how, in the afterlife, does she not know the true identity of Andrew? Questions questions!!
Fallen angels, or angels sent by God to protect. I have to question why Andrew is so interested in them, why he does seem to care (in the good way) and not just want them dead. If they are causing him problems, sending the evil things back to hell, why doesn't he kill them? Better to keep them close, or better to not really piss off God?
I am very intrigued.
I also found Sam's mental abilities interesting. John mentioned that there wasn't much left of them, but they seem strong. Stronger than before in regards to moving things, but lacking in the "seeing" power. But he was able to see Dean, and see him in a way that wasn't available before. Before the visions were all about the future, hours into the future, no immediate-let-me-duck-the-punch future. And Dean still has some of the demon's powers, which he did not share with John or Sam. In the end, these two are going to be very hard to stop as they are very powerful.
I hope that the sequel is as much fun to write as this one as I'm really looking forward to learning more about Sam and Dean's powers, Andrew and how the Winchesters are bound together.
Really enjoyed the story, took me a long time to get through it -- stupid work and stuff. But you guys rock with this. *g*
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Date: 2006-06-21 05:17 pm (UTC)I have to admit to being confused about John's concern about Andrew. I agree that I found Andrew - odd, but not evil perse, just odd. Not quite what he was saying but I couldn't pinpoint what he was hiding. So you leave us with him hiding that he's the devil? That's just peachy. And then you hint that maybe Sam and Dean are fallen angels, at least I took it to be that way. (And how long as he (Lucifer) been Andrew? Always? After macking with Dean?) And how did Mary not know? I found her order of Andrew not to touch the cooler odd, as though she were afraid he wanted the power for himself. And maybe she did think that, but how, in the afterlife, does she not know the true identity of Andrew? Questions questions!!
Fallen angels, or angels sent by God to protect. I have to question why Andrew is so interested in them, why he does seem to care (in the good way) and not just want them dead. If they are causing him problems, sending the evil things back to hell, why doesn't he kill them? Better to keep them close, or better to not really piss off God?
I am very intrigued.
I also found Sam's mental abilities interesting. John mentioned that there wasn't much left of them, but they seem strong. Stronger than before in regards to moving things, but lacking in the "seeing" power. But he was able to see Dean, and see him in a way that wasn't available before. Before the visions were all about the future, hours into the future, no immediate-let-me-duck-the-punch future. And Dean still has some of the demon's powers, which he did not share with John or Sam. In the end, these two are going to be very hard to stop as they are very powerful.
I hope that the sequel is as much fun to write as this one as I'm really looking forward to learning more about Sam and Dean's powers, Andrew and how the Winchesters are bound together.
Really enjoyed the story, took me a long time to get through it -- stupid work and stuff. But you guys rock with this. *g*