And what the holy hell did you do to your hair?" I couldn't stop laughing at this one, imagining Dean with his new dye job.
You did a marvelous job with setting the tension in Dean's interactions with both the demon and Bobby. I could feel his fear and his decision to run away. I wasn't as clear, though, on why Dean considered killing Bobby. Bobby had shown he wasn't aligned with the demon and knew Dean and his family (so was potentially a friend). Dean seemed to stop only because Bobby was unconscious, not because he doubted Bobby's words. Why was his family hunting for him? Is it because Dean feels that his family is also out to get him?
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Date: 2006-05-16 03:39 pm (UTC)I couldn't stop laughing at this one, imagining Dean with his new dye job.
You did a marvelous job with setting the tension in Dean's interactions with both the demon and Bobby. I could feel his fear and his decision to run away. I wasn't as clear, though, on why Dean considered killing Bobby. Bobby had shown he wasn't aligned with the demon and knew Dean and his family (so was potentially a friend). Dean seemed to stop only because Bobby was unconscious, not because he doubted Bobby's words. Is it because Dean feels that his family is also out to get him?