I love the details that you put in, and I love the trenchant analytical skill they show. The description of Applewood and its place in space is brilliant.
The conversation between Marisa and Jeremy is so very real--the things unsaid beneath those said, the way they hurt each other even though part of them doesn't want to--it's all so very well done.
As always, I am happy to wait for installments from you if what comes at the end of the wait is this damned good.
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Date: 2009-10-03 06:18 pm (UTC)The conversation between Marisa and Jeremy is so very real--the things unsaid beneath those said, the way they hurt each other even though part of them doesn't want to--it's all so very well done.
As always, I am happy to wait for installments from you if what comes at the end of the wait is this damned good.