I love how I don't quite understand what went on in this world, what made people like Jeff needed, and it doesn't bother me in the least, they way you've built this story to be all about the relationship between Jeff and Jensen, nothing else is important, nothing else is necessary. Just them.
And they are so well fleshed out that the little glimpses we do get of this society make total sense.
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Date: 2008-10-25 01:49 am (UTC)I love how I don't quite understand what went on in this world, what made people like Jeff needed, and it doesn't bother me in the least, they way you've built this story to be all about the relationship between Jeff and Jensen, nothing else is important, nothing else is necessary. Just them.
And they are so well fleshed out that the little glimpses we do get of this society make total sense.
This is perfect. Plus, y'know, cyberpunk.