You let just enough info out to really hook the reader. I can't wait to to learn more about Jeff and Jensen. This story is so intense it's a little frightening - the way you describe Jeff's actions with the Supervisor, and Jensen's inner fear about what he's getting himself into. Thanks for sharing :-)
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Date: 2007-10-23 02:38 am (UTC)