ext_20224 ([identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nilchance 2009-02-03 03:16 am (UTC)

things that made me go "hmm..."

Why "particularly" not a Morgan? What do the Aunts know about Jeff that *he* doesn't-and does Misha know it? Did he know it *before* he got together with Jeff, or is it a coincidence that there's something *to* know? I wouldn't let Jeff find out, if it's the former!

And why no men in the circle? If it were men saying no women, they wouldn't like it much...just like any group that gets their -isms flipped back on them. Unless there's solid reasons to exclude them, like the power they're worshipping doesn't like men or something, then it's just a bunch of old biddies being possessive of their status. Like a gentleman's club! *iz amused*


I'm practically cross-eyed with tired right now, but I wanted to try to catch some up on this verse. I love it very much, and fell behind, BOO. I'm impressed with how consistently you're keeping the mood and tone, even when dealing with the more mundane conversations. :)

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