ext_20224 ([identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nilchance 2008-04-20 07:00 pm (UTC)

This has the familiar elements that we know from your other Jeff/Jensen fics, but a very different feel to it. Much more...affectionate? Sweet, yes, like a lingering caress. *smiles*

If Jeff were a little less *himself*, it might be a bit melancholy from his longing; or at least I see it that way. It's the "He didn't get Jen like this, stretched out and stripped and pliant. He might not get it again' lines that give me that impression. Without them, it would be just a "Jen gets high and turn sweetly pliant and they have hot sex" fic; but with those lines come layers.

They may be lovers-or at least fuck buddies-but not easy with each other, normally, from what Jeff's thinking. Makes me wonder about the morning after (well, in addition to how they got together and all the rest!) Will Jeff let Jensen put his walls back up? Will Jensen run?

This fic makes me think of candlelight, for some reason.

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