ext_6797 ([identity profile] kbpen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nilchance 2007-09-13 04:06 pm (UTC)

I love how Chris and Jensen interact. This was really sweet, with so many undertones and lots of tension. Yummy! It feels like Jensen is going to explode. He's trying so hard to keep everything contained. (I can only watch by looking through the gaps of my fingers shielding my eyes.) As always, I'm dying to get the next chapter. Thanks, kbpen

Do you want to correct the typos I found? Just a couple of them: You try to hold on that in and it'll kill you. should be You try to hold all that in and it'll kill you. And hesnuck should be he snuck.

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