Since I was gone from LJ for a couple of months I missed the original post of the first story. I made a note to seek it out on my next day off, but by a serendipitous turn I saw this one with the handy link.

I still owe you proper feedback for the first but here I'll just say - OMGSOHOT! ahem!

But this story, this takes the whole storyline to a whole new level. This goes beyond just OMGSOHOT! to OMG! Plot! and Intense Characterization! and the promise of more really yummy stuff to come. All embroidered with lashings of truly awesome angst and Jen not knowing what the hell he wants until Jeff lets him know.

Now I don't know which one to beg for, this or Deathknell. So could you (and beanside) just write twice as fast, please.

Is that too much to ask? *makes with the big kitty eyes*