Woah, i just read the entire fic in one sitting. It took me HOURS!
This is the only fic i've read that has captured their voices so accuratly that i could SEE JP/JA - well done!
This is a thoughtful, well-written, incredibly well paced fic - you haven't gone overboard on description (one of my biggest crimes!) but you've portrayed it with fantastic attention to detail. Hats off to you guys, i'll definatly be reading more of your work!
I loved this. I can't find a fault!