You got me with this part, I've taken to listening to differant songs I think could be soundtracks for this story and they fit, to a tee...of course that reason could be my musical tastes run to the...interesting.

I loved the Dean/Mary/Sam/John stuff, even if it wasn't really a family part just the feeling you guys were able to convey it was *sighs* it reminded me of my own family, reminded me why I love them even though they get on my nerves three quarters of the time.

I really liked the part with Dean/Andrew because it was just *sighs* I almost want more of those two, much more. I could call for sequal with those two and not feel bad about it whatsoever.

Now my favorite part was the Winchester Prayer:

"I do," Dean said. He lifted his head slowly, a smirk on his lips. "Our father, who art John Winchester, badass be thy name. Thy gun be drawn, thy will be done, on earth as it is in hell. " John's crooked grin warmed him more than it ought to, an ache spreading its way through Dean, coloring his voice as he went on. "Give us this day our daily ammo, and forgive us our trespasses, as we fuck up those who trespass against us. Lead us not into destruction, but deliver us from evil."

Gah I could just see Dean reciting this verbatim to his father, with that evil little smirk he does so damned well. The one that makes me want to take him home and chain him to my bed until he agrees to let JD Morgan join us there.

Great work, more soon.