Damn, the Winchesters sure have weak stomachs. Will Sam be vomiting before the end, too? I feel like throwing up is the ultimate physical reaction to emotional upheaval, a heart-wrenchingly involuntary expression of being overwhelmed... but when characters keep doing it, it loses its impact, you know? Especially when we know it's just going to get worse for them in the future. Just my opinion. :)

Another great chapter, and it makes me want to reread the previous one. You've totally got me hooked. Great job, both of you! :D