ext_57576 ([identity profile] x-darkshines-x.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nilchance 2008-04-25 08:53 am (UTC)

I seem to be leaving comments on all the Dean chapters so I thought I'd stop off here and say I think this is my favourite chapter so far. You've captured the characters of the boys - all 3 - so well.
"Adopted by Vikings. Only your brother."
^ ^ by far my favourite line! ^ ^

And in your comment above about John's reaction, I gotta say it makes perfect sense. I was on some level aware of that issue but reading it in your words - you've hit it the nail right on the head.

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