ext_19134 ([identity profile] antigone11.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nilchance 2006-05-11 02:35 pm (UTC)

This is really good. I like your style of alternating the POV between chapters. I can't help but speculate over Jason. Did Dean internalize the "your family doesn't need you" speech from the demon, leaving his subconscious to decide having no family at all was less painful - especially when he woke up in a hospital completely alone, a 'John Doe'? Or is the demon, who seems to track him easily, messing with his memory, getting off on torturing Dean over the thing he fears the most - being alone? Or is his amnesia a physical result from the accident? Or...is the whole thing something completely different? I look forward to further unveilings from your creative mind.

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